Response to first draft

I think this draft was probably one of my worst ones yet. I am a perfectionist so when I write I overthink everything as well as go back and re-write a lot. I feel as if even though it’s just a rough draft, it still needs to be as good as it can be. I try to make the wording sound sophisticated proper. I think I just need to work on being able to get my thoughts down on paper without second guessing so much and thinking it could sound better.